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RESIDENCY PERSONAL STATEMENT SAMPLE HELP We take a residency personal statement from pulseless and cold to normal sinus rhythm |
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The Personal Statement Library presents Personal Statement Extreme Makover where Medfools critiques and comments on real example residency personal statements to help applicants improve their chances for the match. These sample personal statements are here for your viewing pleasure (fully anonymous). If you've got one to add to the free library, don't forget to contribute yours. Makeover #2 EMERGENCY MEDICINE PERSONAL STATEMENT
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3) [This essay has dramatically improved. The writer knows that everything
written must have a purpose. Each statement must add weight to the residency
candidate's application. By cutting the fat on the bloated introduction,
the applicant was able to much more clearly state his reasons for choosing
Emergency Medicine as a career, adding definition to the essay.] |
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