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DERMATOLOGY RESIDENCY PERSONAL STATEMENT
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The Personal Statement Library presents Personal Statement Extreme Makover where Medfools critiques and comments on real example residency personal statements to help applicants improve their chances for the match. These sample personal statements are here for your viewing pleasure (fully anonymous). If you've got one to add to the free library, don't forget to contribute yours. Makeover #5 DERMATOLOGY PERSONAL STATEMENT
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3) It may seem cliché or somewhat naïve that as a 14yo girl because the applicant helped with family skin problems, that was the biggest driving force to becoming a dermatologist. Too many writers start by talking about a sick parent or grandparent. If that paragraph is kept, the Fool would probably shorten it, and try to focus more on later experiences that drove the applicant to dermatology residency. For the clinical rotations paragraph, we would like to hear more about why those rashes/lesions were important, not just the fact that each specialty had dermatologic manifestations. Also, program directors haven’t heard enough about why precisely you want to pursue derm. We like in your conclusion how you say that the lesions of acne are emotionally scarring. Perhapsthis aspect can be added in and other more general aspects of derm and patient care in a previous paragraph.] |
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